The drafts are well presented, it represents the genre well, however you could write about what you did on one, why, what you don't like etc. The picture of the make up could have writing about why you chose to do it like that, was it a struggle? Your conventions of the contents and double page spread are very detailed, however where's the conventions of a fornt cover?
Why did you upload the videos of the photoshoots, which one would you mainly like to be yours?
Everythat you have wrote is very detailed.
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